joy poem

November 2, 2017 - poem

joy at the party with the noise music and the cheer every where

joy at the part when  the presents get open the eyes get bigger

joy with my dog who licks me all day

joy as she snuggles up me

2 thoughts on “joy poem

Hamish Talko

nice but it’s a bit short
it’s still awesome though
maybe next time you could make it rhyme
from The Taco Thief


I really liked it but as Hamish said, it could have been a bit longer but not all poems have to be long so it’s aright! Good job!
Keep writing,


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