October 20, 2017 - 100wc

My goal is to use rhyme in my poems

I was eating my beautiful cake

That I had just baked

I love this beautiful cake

Until a man took my cake

So I hit him with a rake

And then my drake hit him into the lake

I grabbed my cake

Now it is a lake cake

I really miss my beautiful cake

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really great to see you stepping up to be creative in this week’s writing. This is a really fun poem- I particularly like the way you used the double rhyme to end with
We’ll be looking at rhyme in a lesson coming up- see if you can extend the types of rhyme and rhyme pattern you use after seeing the possibilities in the lesson
Great work.


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