my goal is to use more dialog "Hey josh" Jack yelled ruining around the corner "Guest what i found" said Jack still yelling "What" said grumpy Josh "A cave do you want to go in it?" said Jack "OK" said Josh Both boys running to see how wide the cave door is. A sign said "within there shall be a crocodile" They both did not know if they should go in. they decided to go in and see. Jack walked slowly around the corner there was a orange crocodile. Josh stood on a stick the crocodile opened it's eyes and the cave collapsed.