My Autobiography my sixth piece in 2014

Hi my name is Jack. I play basketball we win all the time .We also win trophies like in basketball the trophies can be small or big trophies.

I have a lot of friends. Some are in grade 2 and some are in year 3. One is in prep he is my brother Harrison. He is so nice to me because he will play basketball and soccer. He hates doing homework but he loves readingthe book “Hey Jack the toy sale”

In 10 years I will be a scientist or be a bilder. I really want to be a scientist or a builder because you can bring home experiments to show your kids and they will say, “Cool Dad” or you could bild your house

So that is all about me

Poetry Unit Fith piece in 2014

Old Mother Hubbard went to the mall

 To buy small balls

But when she got back the dog was all fat.


                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  She arrived at the book store

 To purchase some books

But when she got back the dog was all burnt  


     She went to the beach to catch some fish

And when she got back the dog was a fish.


She went to the dentist to punch some teeth

 And when she got back

The dog was a ganster. 

My Little Brother my forth piece in 2014

My little brother Harrison is so cute.

My main reason that my brother Harrison I think about my brother Harrison he can be helpful like yesterday he got my barge and my hat fore me some times he can be annoying like ‘jack can I help you’  so this is why I know my little brother is asem and cool.    

Secondly Harrison always lets me go first pick a move except for when he forgets. A few days ago when I return from my friends and he had returned from a birthday party. I ask “can I go in the shower first”

 His answer is “yes” this is why my brother is terrific.

Aterry therd piece of writing in 2014


Bang! I shot my first arrow.  Bang! There goes another arrow. This time I got a bullseye “YES” I said. “Dad” “I got a bullseye”


“Scott is my dad. He is cool” After we swopped we did the score Dhilan got the most points. I got the second most point.  I am not shoe who got the most pints. I got 2 650 Dhilan got 3 250.

We went to go to have moring  tea. “YUM YUM”

“I am so hungry” that was the best activity out of them all.

Swimming Carnival second piece in 2014


Yay it is free time! Let’s have fun. So I had fun leats play raises ‘ok’ I said. So we play raises. Then we played get the ball so we did. Then Baxter lost his ball. So we tod the life grad then we sow it so Baxter got it. I felt bard for him so I gave him my Gogol’s to him. So he could get his goggles.

Then we went back to school “Bunch up” and we bunched up then we were back at school. Then we plaid on the play grawnend

But! Some som won stuck ther gros dscasting tond.

Christmas Day 1st piece of writing for 2014

Yes! It is Christmas I will get mum and dad up so I can open my presents  then we went in the swimming pool. Then we went to the shop to by food. Then we set the table and cook the food so I played my i-pad and I played minecraft .

Then Ding Dong the visitors are here get the food out of the oven. Clean up Jack and Harrison ok mum dad close the door ok because dad was asleep.

“Mum I didn’t do my homework”

“well Do it Jack”

”  ok” so I did do it.

So my brother Harrison opened the door and said mum nanna is here. so mum said “hi mum and hi dad” and I said “hi par and nanna” “hi Jack and Harrison” said nanna” par can we play” “ok” “yes” I said so we played soccer then we played tense then footy but we got tied so we went in and played Xbox 360 then I played my will I stated to play my ds I got bored. So I went outside and said hi to my friend but she went inside. She came out in a toy car and  drove it around but we went inside and got fish and chips and ate it. After we went outside and watched her in her car again.